My Failed Feast Presentation
This is what I ended up doing for my Failed Feast recount presentation!
I have watched a video then I had to right a story about it.
I could choose between three animals to be a buffalo, a lion or a crocodile.
I decided to be the lions.
I have watched a video then I had to right a story about it.
I could choose between three animals to be a buffalo, a lion or a crocodile.
I decided to be the lions.
Hope you enjoy!
Sharlisa this is an amazing presentation! You have really thought about the audience. It is easy to read and the pictures you have used have a positive impact. I really like how you have added the video to the end of the story so the audience can see the actual event.
ReplyDeleteThis is a really good recount and your orientation is very effective because you make it clear, who you are and what you are doing.
I notice that there is still some punctuation mission (. ,) especially in chapter 3. Proof reading and making those corrections are really important, so do not rush it.
Thank you for sharing this, it is very entertaining.
Well done Sharlisa keep the good work up.
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