Kia Ora Sharlisa, I really like that you chose to present your work in a creative way, it was eye catching. Next time I think you could think more about placement of your text as there is a large space between the title and your work. Maybe you could have put a picture there?
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Kia Ora Sharlisa, I really like that you chose to present your work in a creative way, it was eye catching. Next time I think you could think more about placement of your text as there is a large space between the title and your work. Maybe you could have put a picture there?
ReplyDeleteThanks for the reply,
DeleteI will try to put more effort next time.
I tried to put a picture but it didnt work.
Hi sophie
ReplyDeleteThanks for the reply.
I will try to make it interesting next time.
And cool that u know about the bias.