santas defence

On December 14th I wrote a letter to Santa Claus saying “dear Santa i have been a good boy this year sometime im naughty but i try not to. I hope i can get a velociraptor. I always wanted one but my mum said NO! I am really excited for christmas i will leave cookies for you. Bye santa” then on December the 24th on Christmas eve and I was really excited for a dinosaur “toy”. I baked a batch of cookies for Santa and his elf but i burned it. I went to bed at 10 acock because my mum said i have to sleep before Santa comes. So i went to bed that night and dreamed of me and my toy dinosaur playing at the park. I heard a lot of noises throughout the night but my mum said to not get up if i here stuff. I did what she said but I realized that it wasn't a normal noise. I did the wrong thing and got up. Midway to the christmas tree I seen my mums door open. It was my mum, she didn't see me as i bolt ganged to my room. I went to sleep and woke up around 11 aclock in the morning. 

I was so excited about my toy dinosaur. As I walked into the lounge i heard a roar, i thought it was my toy dinosaur but when i seen this giant present i got really excited that i got the life size doll. I rushed to open it but my mum said “WAIT!” I said “ok” i waited for about 10 minuets then my mum finally said i can open it. But as i went to rip the wrapping paper the “toy” broke through the box. My mum screamed and my dad fainted. I was standing there in shock. The velociraptor went straight to the kitchen and ate all the christmas dinner. He (or she) licked their lips while staring at me it charged at me and knocked me over. I ran to my bed and for about two minutes I was hiding. I quickly ran out and got my ninja turtles toy and attack the dinosaur. The dinosaur ran out of my house into the woods. This year I didn't ask for a dinosaur.