My Failed Feast (first draft)

W.A.L.T recall  events through the eyes of an animal.

Success Criteria
I know I will be successful when my recount has a
Title
Orientation:  When? Who? Where? Why?
Sequence of events:  What happened? Describe using the senses (hear, taste, see, smell and feel).
Personal Comment:  How did the events make you feel?   

First Draft                                                               

  My failed feast

It is a another sunny day at the African Savannah resting in the sun is just a lion thing. I see the buffaloes coming towards us I see a calf. They are coming closer how do they not see us lions. It’s December so the buffaloes start to migrate. The buffaloes are walking towards the river bank, we like to rest by and relax.  I’m feeling really nervous but at the same time feeling ready.

What woman did in ww1

In topic we have been learning about WW1 and I had to do things for the men like making food and picking vegetables and fruit to make yummy food.
I hope you enjoy what I have made to explain what we had to do.

Battle at Kruger Park Sequnce

This is what I had to do in writing. It is from a video we watched.

	The buffalo herd are walking along the side of the fresh lake.
	There are lions and the buffaloes are walking towards them because the buffaloes don't know that they are there.
	The lions are ready to charge at the buffaloes.
	The buffaloes are running from the lions and they chase the calf.
	The lions push the calf into the water so they can catch the calf easy.
	All the buffaloes are charging at the lions to save their calf.
	The buffalo is trying to get the calf because it is still alive.
	The buffaloes get their calf back.

Sharlisa's Learning goals 2016

These are my learning goals which show my writing goals, maths goals and reading goals.

Animal Creator

The Coucheard

Habitat: Rain forests

Diet:  Carnivore. Deer, rabbits, hares, raccoon's, and rodents.

Head: Cougar

They have excellent eyesight and good hearing.

Body: Woolly  Monkey

Keeps very warm on cold days because of its wool.

Legs: Cheetah

The world's fastest land animal, the Coucheard can go from 0 to 65 km (40 mi) per hour in three strides, with a single stride covering 7-8 meters (23-26 feet). Coucherd can reach full speed 110 km (70 mi) per hour in seconds.

Tail: lizard

They wave their long tails in a cat-like fashion before grabbing prey.

Diary Entry WW1

W.A.L.T describe what life was like for men and women in WW1 through a diary entry.